Comic 569 - Good Luck Charm

29th Jul 2014, 5:18 PM in Ch. 22: Valentine's Night
Good Luck Charm
Average Rating: 4.8 (10 votes)
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Jocelyn 29th Jul 2014, 5:18 PM edit delete
Ana's dad makes his first appearance in the story (I don't know how many appearances you should really expect though). Possibly interesting fact: despite the script for this page existing for months, I had never considered what the guy looked like before I opened up a new document to draw this page. And then I was like, "Uh... oh, I should have thought about this." I ended up redrawing the first two panels several times, with different builds, different facial hair, sometimes glasses or no, and each time ended up looking like every other dad/adult male in the story. I'm not 100% satisfied with his look in the end, but I stuck with it. Repeating what I said before, I don't think he's going to be prominent presence in the story. So if a simple-looking dude winds up on a couple pages, so be it.

(Oh, and speaking of character designs: what do you think of Ana with her hair down? I'm a little torn myself.)

Anyway, at least this guy seems like a swell dad (this story could use more of those).

Er... wait... What are they talking about again...?

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

Also, I've said this before, but I'm trying to raise money for SRS, and I'm still struggling with it. If you can help, it would be most welcome. If not, don’t worry about it. I totally understand (you don't need to feel bad or apologize if you can’t).

And as of today, the the chapter cover is at long last complete!! When the chapter is finished, I'll release a montage for anyone who either wasn't paying attention or came in partway through.
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CrossdresserAmy 29th Jul 2014, 6:40 PM edit delete reply
He's not sending Ana away to a "Pray the Gay Away" Camp, is he?
Jocelyn 29th Jul 2014, 6:43 PM edit delete reply

Thankfully, no. :)
Aaeriele 29th Jul 2014, 8:57 PM edit delete reply
Ana with her hair down reminds me a lot of Rain. >_>
j-eagle12212012 29th Jul 2014, 10:40 PM edit delete reply
I want to know more... but prior to this page I did not think there was anything to know... arrrrgh well played Jocelyn well played :)
rachelevil 30th Jul 2014, 1:02 AM edit delete reply
Hmm. Almost sounds as if she might be having some sort of medical procedure or something...
Tayla_88 30th Jul 2014, 2:45 AM edit delete reply
I thiiink I know where Ana's going~ <_< ...but I don't wanna say, 'cause if I do, and I'm right, I'll spoil it for other peoples. D: If it is what I think though... good for her, and really really hope it goes well. o_o
Tayla_88 30th Jul 2014, 2:46 AM edit delete reply
...and Ana with her hair down looks nice~ :D
Mackus 30th Jul 2014, 2:55 AM edit delete reply
She looks better this way, IMO.
Nightsky 30th Jul 2014, 3:49 AM edit delete reply
The way her legs are crossed, and how she covers her lap... Makes me wonder...
Jadelynn 30th Jul 2014, 10:08 PM edit delete reply
Makes me wonder, too. Combine that with the fact that we know that Gavin seems to be oddly attracted to people who look like girls but have different physical equipment, and I don't believe in coincidences.

Jocelyn said in another comment on this page that she is not being sent to "pray the gay away" camp. Could it be possible she's being sent to have a medical operation? A . . . particular medical operation? (I don't think I can hint any stronger without pretty much saying it outright)
Miitu 30th Jul 2014, 5:02 AM edit delete reply
I think I have a hunch where she's going to. Her hair looks lovely this way too.
MarianLH 30th Jul 2014, 9:12 AM edit delete reply
You people with hunches are smarter than me. I have no clue.

But I'll enjoy being surprised. ^_^
Tayla_88 31st Jul 2014, 2:27 AM edit delete reply
Sooo wish I had enough money that I could help and still afford bus fare to work. T_T
Tualha 5th Jun 2015, 3:46 PM edit delete reply
Yep yep yep, she's getting her bottom surgery! Three thousand cheers for supportive parents!
cyrstalclear 8th May 2016, 7:57 AM edit delete reply
I'm late, but I still have an Idea what this is. I don't think Ana's getting SRS. For some reason, I sincerely think she has, like, a cancerous tumor?
I hope that's not the case, as Ana's one of my favorite characters, but I cannot tell you how to write Rain. You already write beautifully.
Guest 7th Mar 2018, 11:22 AM edit delete reply
Aw, she's having important surgery and she's neverous! I would be too. I haven't had surgery minor or major since I was 6.
skrbunny 14th Sep 2022, 7:01 AM edit delete reply
i remember once crossing my legs standing and having a trans woman tell me that it was a dead giveaway.. hmm...

(was my guess from the introduction of the character 'on point' ? ...
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