Comic 47 - Kellen

8th Mar 2011, 8:00 PM in Ch 2: Secrets and Lies
Average Rating: 4.88 (8 votes)
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Jocelyn 8th Mar 2011, 8:00 PM edit delete
You’ve seen Kellen, remember? Fara was supposed to call her back?

Anyway, this page is super talky! (As if you needed me to tell you that.) But I hope it’s not too confusing or anything. There is after all a lot of important dialogue here. Of most important note is the foreshadowing to developments involving the still unrevealed brother, Aiken. But then again, it seems Kellen herself is left out of the loop no matter what side of her family she’s talking to (I’m particularly proud of the punchline in this one).

Little things: Originally, I was thinking of setting actual song lyrics as ringtones for peoples’ phones. I ultimately opted against this for a few reasons though. For one thing - as anyone can plainly see - the page is a little crowded as is, and doesn’t really need MORE words filling it up. Second, I AM trying to avoid any actual products, names, franchises, etc. just to avoid potential legal complication later. It might actually be okay to do it but I personally feel better just playing it safe. Finally, I was still having trouble thinking of exactly what song Fara would have as a ringtone (I’m far too much of a perfectionist to just pick some random song out of a hat). I have narrowed it down to that I imagine her a classic rock fan; just think of your one of your favorites and just hear it coming from her phone. ^_^

Also, Kellen does not actually a psychic link with Aiken. Fara is teasing. If you hadn’t picked up on it by now, Fara teases everyone. That’s what she does. Kellen and Aiken are twins though; that part IS true.

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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mayfirerose 9th Mar 2011, 4:08 PM edit delete reply
Ah, cool. I didnt find it to be confusing. I continue to greatly enjoy your comic! Keep updating and have fun with it!
MarianLH 23rd Apr 2011, 8:48 PM edit delete reply
I really like the third panel, with Kellen being loud and sarcastic.
CyberSkull 19th Mar 2012, 10:18 AM edit delete reply
I picture Fara barely on the couch. She has dropped the phone and is holding her middle as she slowly slides down in a paroxysm of laughter.
Guest 6th Apr 2019, 4:28 PM edit delete reply
Wait... if it's been nearly a year since Kellen last heard from Aiken, how does she know about his new girlfriend that he's only had for a few weeks?
meta 17th Mar 2020, 7:12 PM edit delete reply
that's fara who hadn't heard from aiken. the dialogue format switched as it is fara pictured in that frame.

shame how people just don't talk in so long.
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