Comic 44 - Smokescreen

1st Mar 2011, 8:00 PM in Ch 2: Secrets and Lies
Average Rating: 5 (7 votes)
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Author Notes:

Jocelyn 1st Mar 2011, 8:00 PM edit delete
End flashback sequence. ^_^

To be fair, some of you have correctly predicted the reason for Maria and Gavin’s “relationship”. Others of you, probably just read the character bios. The rest of you might be surprised… or not? It’s not exactly the most complex logic ever…

Artistic notes: the first panel was a bitch to draw (and I’m still not totally happy with it), but I’m generally pleased with it. Also, I really like drawing Debbie (the spectacled girl in panel 3) for some reason; I can’t quite put my finger on it, but I think it’s just that she’s so different from the other characters in design, that it makes her fun to draw. The second to last panel is also quite noteworthy. The “Maria Raspberry” and especially the “Happy Gavin” faces crack me up.

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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CyberSkull 19th Mar 2012, 10:14 AM edit delete reply
She unintentionally grew a beard. :p
Lemon Kirby 26th Feb 2016, 10:49 PM edit delete reply
Lemon Kirby
I realize this was posted awhile ago, but damn your foreshortening and perspective in your art is great.
Lex-Kat 6th Nov 2016, 2:47 AM edit delete reply
Love the first panel. You did an excellent job.
Guest 6th Apr 2019, 3:28 PM edit delete reply
Re-reading this, and I think this has to be my favourite page. Panel 1 is hilarious. I love Rudy's cartoonish face. Panel 4 is also amazing, and efficient. I love Maria and Gavin's reactions in panel 3. The final panel is a great conclusion to this mini flashback arc, which helps to characterise Rudy at this early point. Love it!
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