26th Feb 2013, 6:58 PM
in Ch 14: No More Fake Smiles
Author Notes:
Jocelyn
26th Feb 2013, 6:58 PM
This is a really interesting page, and I personally like it a lot. The images depict smiles on every face in every panel. And yet, Rain’s narration has this subtle hint of melancholy. I know I shouldn’t be patting myself on the back, but I really do love the dichotomy.
The second panel may require a little bit of explaining (not the reference; I’m hoping people just get that ^_^). But for those of you who might not remember, Rain lent her falsies to Rudy for the “Ruby scheme”. At the end of Chapter 12, she narrated that she’d never gotten them back at the end of the night. And for the keen eye, Rain was also unusually flat-chested throughout Chapter 13. Just… little things I did. (Also, I know tissues make awful bra inserts.)
The final panel marks the first time we’re seeing Rain’s braid since. I’ve been giving her pigtails so much lately, I forgot how much I loved the braid. Her newest purple/black party dress is strongly based on one I own, except the purple and black parts are switched.
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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
And now to bombard you with obnoxious links! Go here to order a copy of Rain - Volume 1 today! And then here to vote for "Rain" on TopWebComics!
And if you’re feeling really generous, you can also go here to make a donation to your favorite poor transgendered webcomic artist. Thank you if you do. No hard feelings if you don’t.
The second panel may require a little bit of explaining (not the reference; I’m hoping people just get that ^_^). But for those of you who might not remember, Rain lent her falsies to Rudy for the “Ruby scheme”. At the end of Chapter 12, she narrated that she’d never gotten them back at the end of the night. And for the keen eye, Rain was also unusually flat-chested throughout Chapter 13. Just… little things I did. (Also, I know tissues make awful bra inserts.)
The final panel marks the first time we’re seeing Rain’s braid since. I’ve been giving her pigtails so much lately, I forgot how much I loved the braid. Her newest purple/black party dress is strongly based on one I own, except the purple and black parts are switched.
©2004-2013
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
And now to bombard you with obnoxious links! Go here to order a copy of Rain - Volume 1 today! And then here to vote for "Rain" on TopWebComics!
And if you’re feeling really generous, you can also go here to make a donation to your favorite poor transgendered webcomic artist. Thank you if you do. No hard feelings if you don’t.
User comments:
Also, I like the second-to-last panel a lot. Just awesome. How hard was it to cram everyone in?
I used to hide things I didn't want my parents to see in or underneath my dresser. You'd be surprised how well that works. Otherwise, he could have actually asked Maria to hold onto them. All things considered, I'm sure she'd be only too delighted to do so. ^_^
Also, I love that panel too. It was SO hard to cram everyone in. But I'm glad to hear you like it; it makes it all worth it to hear it's appreciated. ^_^
After such a heavy chapter, I hope things go smooth for Rain and co back at school.
They worked very well.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_dress