Comic 27 - Reputation

20th Jan 2011, 6:00 PM in Ch 2: Secrets and Lies
Average Rating: 5 (7 votes)
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Jocelyn 20th Jan 2011, 6:00 PM edit delete
I think it’s abundantly clear by now that I like lots of dialogue, but this page has been toned down rather graciously. Originally, I had an entire dialogue in place with Maria telling some funny story, that random boy trying to ask Rain out, and of course, Rain herself just being neurotic. Then a few pages later, I reread this page and thought it sounded AWFUL. So bad in fact, that I just deleted all of the dialogue. With no dialogue bubbles, the “silent” page kinda spoke to. Then the better idea of having Rain narrate over the scene while this short montage of events occurs came to me. And that worked ever so much better.

Pay no mind to the random guy. He really is just that: a random guy. After the death glare Maria gave to him, I wouldn’t blame him he ran right out of this comic altogether. And we may never see him again… ^_^

Or will we…?

Nah. I didn’t care much for his design, so probably not…

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Vanessa 2nd Jan 2015, 3:26 PM edit delete reply
Looking back on it, that guy looks a lot like drew... The only difference is his complexion and hair color
Chrissy 30th Dec 2020, 7:38 PM edit delete reply
Nah... Randy M Guy...
meta 9th Jan 2021, 6:16 PM edit delete reply
but he didn't say anything wrong ..

~ 10 years later ~

.. but he didn't say anything wrong!
Absentia 18th Apr 2021, 5:03 PM edit delete reply
Randy never says anything wrong.
OrchidBlip 10th Jun 2015, 12:01 AM edit delete reply
Argh, just started resding this and i already cant stop
Aravore 9th Sep 2015, 7:23 AM edit delete reply
Haha I love Maria's evil eye!
Lex-Kat 31st Oct 2016, 2:01 AM edit delete reply
HOLY...! That stare scares me! *shivers*
Minim 16th Nov 2017, 10:11 PM edit delete reply
The Maria Death Stare:
>can boil an egg from 20 paces;
>will damage your eyes if shone directly into them;
>is a Dark-type move;
>can solve any problem in under a minute.
Maxine 27th Mar 2021, 9:15 AM edit delete reply
Perfect, amazing, love it, tranms/10 (god I'm starved for good representation)
Moonglide 10th Jul 2022, 10:37 PM edit delete reply
how did i never notice that Randy M. Guy came from 'Random Guy'
Das Enby 19th Jul 2022, 9:00 AM edit delete reply
More like how did you notice? I didn’t until you mentioned it…
Moonglide 19th Jul 2022, 3:34 PM edit delete reply
I noticed it because jocelyn just referred to him as a "random guy" and things in my brain clicked
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