Rain - Gavin

Comic 21 - Gavin

6th Jan 2011, 6:00 PM in Ch 1: The New Girl

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Author Notes:

Jocelyn 6th Jan 2011, 6:00 PM edit delete

Now that I look at it, I wonder if this page was even necessary. I feel like all it really did was draw things out just a wee bit longer. Well, I guess it helps establish that Rudy’s not a complete jerk… hopefully…

I ended up changing the dialogue on this one a few times too. Maria’s final line, in particular, originally stated that she thought Gavin was being “emo” because “on the off-hand chance Rudy was right about Rain, he’d owe her ever more money.” As amusing as I thought that was, Maria did technically deny that bet. Plus, no matter how I worded it, it just never felt natural. So while a little funny, I don’t think I really liked the line at all. “I hope she slaps him” though, seems fitting to me… and is potentially still kinda funny.

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Comments:

AliJ5533 7th Jan 2011, 7:00 AM edit delete reply

Hey, now that I've worked out that you update Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays, I don't care if you drag things out.
Cos its never that long till the next installment lol.

Very odd behaviour, though, from Gavin... I wonder what that's all about.

LauraEss 5th Oct 2011, 8:44 AM edit delete reply

Yes, it WAS needed, because we can see that Gavin is not a jerk

Lex-Kat 31st Oct 2016, 1:43 AM edit delete reply

I liked it. I think it added to both Rudy and Gavin's characters, showing that neither of them are jerks.

Minim 16th Nov 2017, 9:47 PM edit delete reply

Rain doesn't seem the type to slap a fly. Gavin seems rather troubled here...