Now that I look at it, I wonder if this page was even necessary. I feel like all it really did was draw things out just a wee bit longer. Well, I guess it helps establish that Rudy’s not a complete jerk… hopefully…
I ended up changing the dialogue on this one a few times too. Maria’s final line, in particular, originally stated that she thought Gavin was being “emo” because “on the off-hand chance Rudy was right about Rain, he’d owe her ever more money.” As amusing as I thought that was, Maria did technically deny that bet. Plus, no matter how I worded it, it just never felt natural. So while a little funny, I don’t think I really liked the line at all. “I hope she slaps him” though, seems fitting to me… and is potentially still kinda funny.
Hey, now that I've worked out that you update Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays, I don't care if you drag things out.
Cos its never that long till the next installment lol.
Very odd behaviour, though, from Gavin... I wonder what that's all about.
Cos its never that long till the next installment lol.
Very odd behaviour, though, from Gavin... I wonder what that's all about.