Comic 203 - RuIn

13th Mar 2012, 8:50 PM in Ch 8: Confrontation
Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)
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Jocelyn 13th Mar 2012, 8:50 PM edit delete
This page picks up where the dialogue on page 184 (Transcendence) left off. As you might recall (and have been likely cursing my name since), Rudy’s dialogue was cut off mid-sentence so I could show Maria and Gavin’s conversation. The pause was intentional, to increase suspense and questions until the very end of the chapter.

But in theory, it will clarify why things happened the way they did.

Rudy’s a lot smoother than he originally seemed…

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Aetherium 14th Mar 2012, 4:15 AM edit delete reply

But...why is it called Ruin? :S Is it meant to be a play on Rudy's name...? I hope it doesn't signify anything bad in future O.O
Jocelyn 14th Mar 2012, 9:46 PM edit delete reply

The first two letters of Rudy plus the last two letters of Rain equal "RuIn". I guess it does sound a little foreboding...
AliJ5533 14th Mar 2012, 6:51 AM edit delete reply
I'm guessing RuIn is a play on Rudy and Rain.
Shame it had to form such an... ominous word, but then you always were all about suspense
DominoJaye 14th Mar 2012, 1:03 PM edit delete reply
I'd have preferred something cuter like Rady. :P
Jay 23rd Mar 2012, 1:20 AM edit delete reply
D'aaaawwwwwwwwwww. If someone said that to me my heart would melt.
Micheal 10th Oct 2012, 2:24 PM edit delete reply
Reread this to catch up on stuff I missed... got a swift boot to the feels again. ; -; such a good story
Kyla 20th Oct 2013, 12:07 PM edit delete reply
WOW!!! i have no words, I mean i'm like, Does Rudy know Rain is going to get a sex change one day and if so will he still love/like her OMG!!! And is Rain Bi or does she only like guys... My head is spinning... This is the best comic EVER!!
Albireo 20th Dec 2013, 1:13 AM edit delete reply
Been going on as Al in the comments for awhile now but this made me want to register just to have an easier time commenting. Just wow on this chapter. Amazing twist on the usual comedic character
Jennifer K 19th Feb 2014, 1:52 AM edit delete reply

Should Rain really be dating ANYONE right now? I feel like this relationship is not healthy for either party.
Syrup 5th Sep 2014, 1:15 AM edit delete reply
priceless by priceless i mean its not going to have a price after i tear it up burn it and bury the ashes at the botom of the maranara trench and keep the only copy of the image
Sky Beams 29th Jul 2016, 6:42 PM edit delete reply
Awww! uguu
I just got diabetes from dat sweetness! >:O
JK. But that's seriously sweet. :)
Lex-Kat 16th Nov 2016, 10:41 AM edit delete reply
Ouch. This is not going to be good for Maria.

Loved the rest of the conversation though.
Melinda 17th Aug 2018, 8:05 AM edit delete reply
I know it's generally up to the person, in the case Rudy, to decide what they are. but I think this makes Rudy bi or possibly pan. he loves Rain for who she is, not what she is.
Waffle 14th Jun 2022, 10:13 AM edit delete reply
Gotta say, Rain doesn't sound enthusiastic or confident here. Not that "confident" is something she's displayed much elsewhere so far... On the other hand, that looks like a genuine smile to me, so I could be reading too much in.
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