Comic 17 - It's a Small World After All

28th Dec 2010, 6:02 PM in Ch 1: The New Girl
It's a Small World After All
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Jocelyn 28th Dec 2010, 6:02 PM edit delete
Gavin and Maria, once again so close to the truth, and yet so far. Rain’s compelling response to Gavin’s question (ie. - running the hell away) has helped to keep her secret safe for the time being, but was that really the best move?

I have to be honest. I’m not crazy about this page. Looking back, I think I could’ve probably condensed this page and the last page into one to make things move along a little quicker. But then I’d have had less time to establish foreshadowing for Maria in the last page, and Rain’s fear of discovery on this page. Okay, so maybe condensing isn’t quite what I’m looking for, but I still feel like I could have done better with these two pages.

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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AliJ5533 1st Jan 2011, 11:48 PM edit delete reply
How did you do the speed line effect around Rain in Panel 6?
I have unsuccessfully been trying to get an effect like that for ages lol
Rainboq 10th Jul 2011, 8:14 PM edit delete reply
For some reason, the effect in panel 6 resembles the Time Vortex from Dr. Who o.o
Hansi_Dar 9th Aug 2011, 4:38 AM edit delete reply
Oh dear, haha... Running away seems like a good choice for her
xPegasusx 18th Jun 2012, 5:23 PM edit delete reply
lol I already like Maria ^-^
williewood 9th Aug 2012, 9:11 PM edit delete reply
great stuff, an old friedn
Lex-Kat 19th Oct 2016, 8:38 AM edit delete reply
Well, here I am, back where I left off last time. I'll pause here, as I need my sleep, and see if I can resume instead of forget this time. :)

And Rain is so cute.
Minim 16th Nov 2017, 9:30 PM edit delete reply
Panicking and running is unlikely to be a helpful move... but then the alternative is that she lies her ass off, and that is just as risky a move, if not more.
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