Comic 1428 - First Memory

22nd Oct 2021, 8:22 AM in Ch. 43 - Liriel's Daughter
First Memory
Average Rating: 5 (9 votes)
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Jocelyn 22nd Oct 2021, 8:22 AM edit delete
Blast from the past, eh? Check out those Page 1 callbacks! XD

And yes, this will lead into the next page too. It's hard to decide where and when to cut off pages or make two-pagers when this whole section is essentially just one conversation. :P

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Tokuben 22nd Oct 2021, 9:00 AM edit delete reply
And now she is a mommy :)
Long-Time Lurker 22nd Oct 2021, 11:10 AM edit delete reply
Interesting how her siblings faces back then mirror their current attitudes (brother = curious and a but confused but overall not bothered, sister = shocked and horrified).
bgb16999 22nd Oct 2021, 5:23 PM edit delete reply
I think that's more like their Chapter 23-26 attitudes. Kellen and Aiken have both changed somewhat since then.
Amy 22nd Oct 2021, 1:24 PM edit delete reply
I've been following this comic since I was a depressed, closeted 8th grader. Now I'm a freshman in college, an out and proud lesbian, and it's coming to a close soon. Time sure flies! And things get better. Thank you Jocelyn for giving me characters to see myself in!
RangerVI 22nd Oct 2021, 3:12 PM edit delete reply
After several months of having somehow forgotten to check back here, I somehow get all caught up again within a few hours of the newest page going up, amazing.
trans-meerkat 22nd Oct 2021, 3:15 PM edit delete reply
I enjoy these car conversation panels, but my anxiety is like "Fara isn't keeping her eyes on the road >_<"
masterbladero 23rd Oct 2021, 4:28 AM edit delete reply
Compared to some driving I've seen that her head is still facing forward makes her still doing good in my book...and that tells how bad drivers are in my area.
Prezombie 23rd Oct 2021, 5:13 AM edit delete reply
And no seat belts auurgh...
Chrissy 3rd Dec 2021, 9:29 PM edit delete reply
Good catch. I don't think I've ever seen seatbelts in the car scenes.... They're going to get expensive tickets...
bgb16999 22nd Oct 2021, 5:22 PM edit delete reply
Before reading the commentary, the first thing I did was flip back to page 1 to see whether that panel was cut and paste or whether you redrew it. I thought it looked different:)
Cindy 23rd Oct 2021, 3:00 AM edit delete reply
I feel bad for asking but I'm not 100% sure I remember... how did Rain's mom die again?
Jocelyn 23rd Oct 2021, 3:02 PM edit delete reply

I've actually never specified, kind of on purpose. But there's a pretty strong implication that it was likely cancer.
Discoh 23rd Oct 2021, 6:46 PM edit delete reply

That was the conclusion I got from that page, but now your wording has me on edge...
Cindy 25th Oct 2021, 12:06 PM edit delete reply
Ooh, then it makes sense I don't fully remember. Thanks for the reply, it's appreciated!
masterbladero 23rd Oct 2021, 4:34 AM edit delete reply
Small smile from Liriel, minor shock and confusion from Aiken, much bigger shock from Kellen and a happy little Rain. Seems like an appropriate reaction to her now being a mother, even if its not the expected way.

Just without Aiken laughing right after like he did in page 1 and Kellen...well hard to tell currently.
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