Comic 8 - Tact

7th Dec 2010, 6:24 PM in Ch 1: The New Girl
Tact
Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)
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Jocelyn 7th Dec 2010, 6:24 PM edit delete
Jocelyn
I'd like everyone to be aware that out of all of the 30+ pages I currently have prepared, this is my absolute LEAST favorite. I just don't like it. Maybe it's the layout or all the lazy copy/pasting or the fact that I can't draw cars worth crap.

Thinking positively though, that means it really only gets better from here.

Or maybe you'll like it more than I do. ^_^

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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AliJ5533 20th Dec 2010, 3:50 AM edit delete reply
AliJ5533
Well, I quite like this page.
I love the expressions on your characters, especially Rain
Doomy 1st Jul 2011, 3:42 AM edit delete reply
Doomy
Pfffft.

Awesome advice from Aunt Fara.

She's so cute and funny.
I wish I had an aunt like her. xD;;;
TheAlmightyJ 28th Jan 2012, 4:37 PM edit delete reply
Yep. The advice from a non-LGBT parent is never very good.
Jocelyn 29th Jan 2012, 3:01 AM edit delete reply
Jocelyn
@TheAlmightyJ

Fara IS an LGBT parent (or guardian rather, being her aunt), actually, for what it's worth. She's bi. ^_^
Skyangel 10th May 2012, 11:25 PM edit delete reply
Skyangel
It's a really lovely page. You write really well and the story is very absorbing and that's far more important than being picky about the art.
Runya 15th Jun 2014, 8:05 PM edit delete reply
This page isn't showing :(
Jocelyn 15th Jun 2014, 11:36 PM edit delete reply
Jocelyn
@Runya

Try reloading. It's showing just fine on my end.
Lex-Kat 9th Mar 2015, 6:31 AM edit delete reply
Love this page. I like Rain's reaction in the last panel.
Ruth 2nd Aug 2016, 3:07 AM edit delete reply
I don't think anybody really paid that much attention to the car. Generic car is generic car and just a background prop for what's really important... the dialog.
Lex-Kat 19th Oct 2016, 12:09 PM edit delete reply
Lex-Kat
I like the solo panels of Fara. Like Ruth said, the car is background to what is truly important, the conversation. I'm sure you'll get better at drawing cars... if that's what you want.
Minim 17th Nov 2017, 1:45 AM edit delete reply
I love the expressions in the last two panels. They are perfection.
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