Comic 539 - Fine, Young Woman

21st May 2014, 12:52 AM in Ch. 21: Valentine's Day
Fine, Young Woman
Average Rating: 5 (8 votes)
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Author Notes:

Jocelyn 21st May 2014, 12:52 AM edit delete
Jocelyn
And so, Chapter 21 comes to a weird and somewhat abrupt end. If you noticed: sorry. I had a lot of trouble ending this chapter for some reason. I had a moment like two weeks ago when I was starting to draw these pages where I looked at the original script and said, "Wow, this is utter tripe! How did I not notice this in the months since I originally wrote it!?" So these pages are COMPLETELY different from what they were before. It's still a little campy, but at least it's relevant and makes some sense now (making it a huge improvement from the original script). The downside is that I personally think it just feels like any other page. As a random page, it's not terrible. But as a chapter closer, it's somehow clunky to me. I dunno. Hopefully it's just me, but if it it's awkward to you too, I'm sorry. I can guarantee I'll make it up to you with the next chapter.

But if you didn't feel anything was wrong with this page, ignore everything you just read in the previous paragraph! And then look forward to the next chapter~! XD

Also, I finally joined 2007 and started a Tumblr account. Originally, it was just on a random whim, but after a few suggestions, I think I'd like to do an ask blog. It's not set up quite yet as of this writing, but that may change soon if anyone's interested. ^_^
http://lynnwritesstuff.tumblr.com/


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Comments:

Yuki-chan 21st May 2014, 2:05 AM edit delete reply
a cute page n.n
Rina 21st May 2014, 4:57 AM edit delete reply
Very cute and I think it's totally relevant. It may not rap things up quite the way you normally prefer but it leaves us on a bit of a cliffhanger as well as brings us back to how much Rain has clearly grown. I know that's something we all could use when we feel like we've had crappy days or feel bad being happy... All in all, love this page tremendously.

Also, following you on Tumblr and your page is super cute :) <3
MarianLH 21st May 2014, 12:02 PM edit delete reply
MarianLH
Very d'awwww-some ending.
j-eagle12212012 21st May 2014, 12:26 PM edit delete reply
j-eagle12212012
@Jocelyn
Be careful with the ask blog on tumblr, there are a lot of trolls and pervs that will fill your question box with offensive crap, but if you filter through it an ask blog can be quite educational.
Guest 21st May 2014, 9:49 PM edit delete reply
So what is your tumblr URL?
Jocelyn 21st May 2014, 11:15 PM edit delete reply
Jocelyn
@Guest

It's http://lynnwritesstuff.tumblr.com/
dumok 22nd May 2014, 11:35 AM edit delete reply
dumok
Stalkin I mean Following
Jadelynn 22nd May 2014, 6:02 PM edit delete reply
Jadelynn
"You're growing up into a fine, young woman"

I don't know, maybe it's because it hits a little close to home for me, but line just made me cry tears of happiness.
Magnanimousbosch 23rd May 2014, 2:09 AM edit delete reply
Right? I am weeping here.
Tualha 5th Jun 2015, 7:15 PM edit delete reply
Tualha
Fara rocks :)
steveha 3rd Aug 2015, 6:25 AM edit delete reply
A very nice page, and I remain a big fan of Aunt Fara.
Akane 27th Jun 2016, 2:55 AM edit delete reply
Imho this was quite a nice way to end this chapter. A lot of rumble happened through the pages past, which sparked a lot of emotions in everyone, especially sensitive-hearted Rain. Fara's encouragement was truly beautiful, if I had someone in my life to say those words to me, I'd be the happiest girl alive. All in all, a beautiful page, and a really nice happy ending to wrap the chapter up. ^-^
Megadaman 6th Jul 2016, 2:04 AM edit delete reply
Megadaman
I think I literally just squee'd, that was so cute!
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