Comic 49 - Open Up

14th Mar 2011, 12:00 AM in Ch 2: Secrets and Lies
Open Up
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)
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Jocelyn 14th Mar 2011, 12:00 AM edit delete
Jocelyn
Oh, man. This page never stops being horribly awkward.

Originally, I was going to make this page cause even more uncomfortable writhing; that is, it was going to be ENTIRELY Kellen’s questions followed up by Rain’s one word answers. I decided I could progress things a little better by adding Fara’s little segment at the end though. Besides, a whole page of a lazily drawn image copy/pasted that many times could get pretty tiring. I even decided to have Rain turn her head once or twice to avoid that.

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Comments:

DensetsuEX 14th Mar 2011, 12:12 AM edit delete reply
DensetsuEX
You probably now by know.
Poor family D= torn apart by one man's difference and secrecy.
LET IT OUT RAIN/RYAN! They should still love you.
Skyangel 11th May 2012, 9:14 PM edit delete reply
Skyangel
I really love this page best of all so far. The scripting is both very moving and realistic as well as being nicely paced out so I felt the awkwardness of the situation coming across extremely well.
Lex-Kat 6th Nov 2016, 8:16 AM edit delete reply
Lex-Kat
I feel so bad for Kellen. She seems like a really nice sister, and she's feeling alone and unwanted. She seemed so excited to talk to Ryan, only to get one word answers. :'(
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