Comic 44 - Smokescreen

2nd Mar 2011, 1:00 AM in Ch 2: Secrets and Lies
Smokescreen
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)
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Author Notes:

Jocelyn 2nd Mar 2011, 1:00 AM edit delete
Jocelyn
End flashback sequence. ^_^

To be fair, some of you have correctly predicted the reason for Maria and Gavin’s “relationship”. Others of you, probably just read the character bios. The rest of you might be surprised… or not? It’s not exactly the most complex logic ever…

Artistic notes: the first panel was a bitch to draw (and I’m still not totally happy with it), but I’m generally pleased with it. Also, I really like drawing Debbie (the spectacled girl in panel 3) for some reason; I can’t quite put my finger on it, but I think it’s just that she’s so different from the other characters in design, that it makes her fun to draw. The second to last panel is also quite noteworthy. The “Maria Raspberry” and especially the “Happy Gavin” faces crack me up.

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Comments:

CyberSkull 19th Mar 2012, 2:14 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
She unintentionally grew a beard. :p
Lemon Kirby 27th Feb 2016, 3:49 AM edit delete reply
Lemon Kirby
I realize this was posted awhile ago, but damn your foreshortening and perspective in your art is great.
Lex-Kat 6th Nov 2016, 7:47 AM edit delete reply
Lex-Kat
Love the first panel. You did an excellent job.
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