Comic 27 - Reputation

20th Jan 2011, 11:00 PM in Ch 2: Secrets and Lies
Reputation
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)
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Jocelyn 20th Jan 2011, 11:00 PM edit delete
Jocelyn
I think it’s abundantly clear by now that I like lots of dialogue, but this page has been toned down rather graciously. Originally, I had an entire dialogue in place with Maria telling some funny story, that random boy trying to ask Rain out, and of course, Rain herself just being neurotic. Then a few pages later, I reread this page and thought it sounded AWFUL. So bad in fact, that I just deleted all of the dialogue. With no dialogue bubbles, the “silent” page kinda spoke to. Then the better idea of having Rain narrate over the scene while this short montage of events occurs came to me. And that worked ever so much better.

Pay no mind to the random guy. He really is just that: a random guy. After the death glare Maria gave to him, I wouldn’t blame him he ran right out of this comic altogether. And we may never see him again… ^_^

Or will we…?

Nah. I didn’t care much for his design, so probably not…

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Comments:

Vanessa 2nd Jan 2015, 8:26 PM edit delete reply
Looking back on it, that guy looks a lot like drew... The only difference is his complexion and hair color
Takiri 10th Jun 2015, 4:01 AM edit delete reply
Takiri
Argh, just started resding this and i already cant stop
Aravore 9th Sep 2015, 11:23 AM edit delete reply
Haha I love Maria's evil eye!
Lex-Kat 31st Oct 2016, 6:01 AM edit delete reply
Lex-Kat
HOLY...! That stare scares me! *shivers*
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