Comic 190 - The Center

13th Feb 2012, 6:32 AM in Ch 7: Mixed Feelings
The Center
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)
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Jocelyn 13th Feb 2012, 6:32 AM edit delete
Jocelyn
Told you it was a short one. ^_^

We wrap things up here with:
Emily and Chase still fighting, and with no end in sight.
Kylie, still unsure of himself… and now unsure of Rain as well.
Rob and Drew’s friendship becomes awkward.
Rudy answers ALL of Maria’s questions.
Gavin bids farewell after helping in the only way he felt he could.
And finally, Rain is left to wonder what the next day could possibly bring…

By the way, I’m not crazy about the narration here. To me, it feels tacky. But having short snippets of dialogue was actually worse. And not having any words at all just made it look horribly incomplete. So I feel like I couldn’t really win with this one. -_-

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AliJ5533 13th Feb 2012, 8:32 AM edit delete reply
AliJ5533
Grrr... panel 4, y u no have dialogue on you?
You sure do love teasing your audience
MarianLH 13th Feb 2012, 2:23 PM edit delete reply
MarianLH
Maria's expression is great though.
Synergiance 17th Feb 2016, 4:50 AM edit delete reply
I actually really like the commentary on this, it may be tacky but it ties up the chapter nicely. I've noticed you seem to have a way of choosing the right way to end a chapter regardless of if you like it or not
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