Comic 109 - See You Later

29th Jul 2011, 2:00 AM in Ch 4: Not the Same
See You Later
Average Rating: 5 (5 votes)
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Author Notes:

Jocelyn 29th Jul 2011, 2:00 AM edit delete
Jocelyn
I debated for a long time whether or not to make a double-header out of this one, or to simply release them as two completely separate pages on different days. I do think they can each stand alone well enough despite the second page’s general lack of dialogue. And as we all know, I can ALWAYS use a bit of extra time to stall for more time to do pages.

Still - perhaps against my better judgment - I went along with making it two pages. It felt right. What can I say.

To clarify what’s happened here, in case there’s any confusion, Gavin has not necessarily suddenly accepted Rain for who she is. He has not necessarily apologized for anything. Perhaps someday, he will; who can say for right now? But this isn’t the sort of thing someone like him can just get over in a single night. He has, however, shown a willingness to try. Even if he is deeply troubled by Rain’s predicament, he can’t deny that he had a good time staying up all night with her.

And that, I think, is a worthy first step.

Also, no, this still isn’t the end of the chapter… ^_^

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Comments:

AliJ5533 29th Jul 2011, 11:41 AM edit delete reply
AliJ5533
I'm really gald you did it as a double page.
It saved me from starting to hate Gavin again lol.

Also, I just find Rain's happy face in the final panel so cute ^^
Max 29th Jul 2011, 7:54 PM edit delete reply
Max
i agree, that face is priceless xD
Max 29th Jul 2011, 7:54 PM edit delete reply
Max
i agree, that face is priceless xD
Max 29th Jul 2011, 7:54 PM edit delete reply
Max
i agree, that face is priceless xD
Lex-Kat 14th Nov 2016, 11:18 AM edit delete reply
Lex-Kat
Okay, we get it. ;p Her face in the last panel really is priceless.

This page made me tear up. I'm glad he made the right decision, in letting her know he wants to at least try to be friends.
LauraEss 5th Oct 2011, 2:51 PM edit delete reply
LauraEss
Yay!

:D
steveha 2nd Aug 2015, 6:54 AM edit delete reply
This is the *perfect* note to end this story arc. Sweet, but really believable.
Lex-Kat 14th Nov 2016, 12:20 PM edit delete reply
Lex-Kat
There is an error in Simone's second panel speech bubble. I believe "Chew her just out a little?" should be "Chew her out just a little?" right?
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